Drifted

Drifted

You took me away
You swept me to go in the ocean
To swim in the sea of love and play
Now, I step in the shore of this ocean again,

I feel the slow caress of water
It momentarily eases the agony of feelings in me
The coldness from my submerge body starts to cover
But the coldness of water jolt along with pain I'm living now,

The pain is burdening my heart,
It is heavier than what I carry on my shoulders
Endlessly, it tore my heart apart
How bad it hurts inside of me?

How much pain can love cost?
It torments my feelings in almost eternal torture
Pain succumb my consciousness in lost,
It is nibbling my heart into pieces of shattered glass

The pain that I'm feeling now is because of you,
You broke me into pieces
I am now a shattered puzzle because of you
Now, I cannot find myself anymore,

I heard a sad love song from beyond
It only makes me sadder much
I'm getting deeper in despond
No one can save me now

The currents of water glides my arms
To float in this sea of sorrow
I become fool because of your charms
Now your love cause my sulled anguish

I looked above the gloomy sky
All I see were melancholic clouds,
When will sun shine in my sky?
When I am all depress because of your love

Flipping my feet to float against the waters, I'm dejected,
My world is now morose
I'm disheartened with this heartache's thread,
I never thought drowning in this pain,

I'm becoming numb for the pain has totally destroyed me
I'm tired of living this pain
And so I submit to eternal lost of foresee
I am forever drifting in this currents of water.
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This my special Valentine entry. Now don't get me wrong that I am becoming bitter because I posted a sad love poem for this special day for lovers. It is not that I don't have happy lovelife but I want to deviate from the usual happy love poems that is mostly read. It is a milestone in my poem writing history as this is not just an ordinary poem but my first sad love poem written. I usually write happy love poems (see my previous posts) but this time I try to explore writing the other subject of love poems. I wrote it last July 26, 2006 and it is about how painful is to be heart broken that can lead you drowning in pain.

Well, I hope you like it and let me hear comments from you. Happy Heart's Day!

Sweet Temptation

Sweet Temptation

You are irrisistible
From the deeper place of Blue
I cannot resist looking at you
It seems a sin to miss your visage in my eyes

Looking at you put me in lorn ponder
It was impossible to resist your charm
It waters my eyes in hidden harm
Now, all I see from my sight is a pool of love

My feelings torn inside me
The passions collide in me
Wild abandon inside of me
This is what I fear; I fall in the cliff of your love

Everything was just from a look
And suddenly love poison me, suddenly as rainfall
It makes me move beyond my control
All I desire now is to follow you from my sight

I cannot fight this feeling
I'm becoming weak at this seduction
Would I resist this love back on a sudden run?
Or would I slip in this sweet temptation

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This is the last and third of my Victoria's Secret series trilogy poems written in July 11, 2006. Its all about resisting a tempting love but one can't help byt fall to it. Now the speaker can't decide if he will resist it or let himself fall to it.

I wanna hear your comments/reactions... Pls, pls, pls, put a comment about this poem.

Last hurray...

Its almost 24 hours from now and its already 2008! We only have a 1 day to go to say goodbye to 2007. But before 2008... there are so many "best things" that happened to me this year. I have so many "whereabouts" and "eventus" just this 2007. I've met a lot of people and made a lot of friends. I've been in 3 jobs in one year (not to mention of different fields each and not so much related to my psych course). I experience a lot of situation that challenges me as a person. And I learned a lot this year from those experiences and people I've met. Well, thanks for being part of my year 2007... you're now part of my history. Thanks for making me a new me!

2008... Mmm... Next year I'm "routing" on other things like making "merry things" in my love-life coz since I've been very focused on getting a stable job. And I'm looking forward to work in an airline company. But anyway its a long 365 days and a lot of things may happen. But one thing is for sure I'm going to travel a lot! Now that I've bought a digicam Canon Ixus and after a year of no travel as in dry hopping. This year I'm gonna make sure that I will travel! travel! travel!

Happy New Year bloggers!

Victoria's Secret Series: Romantic Wish

Romantic Wish

How I wish were so in love,
Pouring affection to each other in sweet delight,
Caressing in sweet moment,
All I desire this was heaven sent,

How I wish we were lovers
Sharing each day together
I won’t spend a day without you
So I won’t be in space of blue,

How I wish we are kissing
And holding hands while smelling amber romance
We could walk together in vanilla lace
Or we could solely gone pure seduction in someplace

How I wish we were in romance
And very true from our feelings to our pondering
I will love you the way I know what love is
Feel this love I send through my blow of kiss

How I wish you are mine
So we could savor this love I have dream
Romances I’ve always wish to happen
But how long I will wish? How soon is when?


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Weeks have become months! I told that in my last post that the next series poem will come in the following weeks and now its September! Though busy working on my job, this is the second of my Victoria's Secret poems which I wrote in July 5, 2006. Well, as the title speaks for itself so does the message it says... but the common denominator is that everything is romantic and romance is all over but read the last line... how I long will wish? If you like this poem or any reactions to say, tell me right away. Have a nice blogging day!

Victoria's Secret Series: Endless Love

Endless Love

Forever is all I desire to hear,
And it is what my heart utters in cheer,
Forever is a place I want to stay
And so in this place I shall dwell in bliss

Everlasting my love will be
For this is the promise of love I plea
In my heart this will hold true
For you gave me the same true love I hope for

My love will surpass even death
Because it will live in death
This love I give is eternal
It won’t be simply forgotten nor neglect.

Even death comes to avenge by mistral
The love I pour won't lost in death of eternal
For the happiness I feel in this love is ethereal passion
And the felicity I found in this love surpasses the boundaries of earthly bliss.

My love will always be with you
This holds in my heart and mind in true
This will be my vow of love
Love that will be... always... forever... endless...
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I'm back! After a long absence (again!?!), here I present to you one of my Victoria's Secret Poem Trilogy Series written in July 3, 2006 entitled "Endless Love". It is actually one of the cologne flavors of Victoria Secret's line products... the flavor titles were so catchy that it inspired me to write poems about it. I intended to write this poem to make readers feel and picture what "great and endless love" is? Did I achieve it? Feel free to write your comments below about the poem and stay tune in the coming weeks as I complete this Victoria's Secret Poem Series.

Repost: Echoes of Caressing Cry

Echoes of Caressing Cry

A river of emotion within me flows
A burst of affection slowly grows
While I ponder
Dreamy in a wonder

My thoughts were in delight
But in my heart, there is firelight
Its warm is conquering my body in uproar
A warm I never felt before

Though I deny
Blue-sky is in my eye
Felicity is swimming in my vein
And bliss to this feelings play in my brain

I conceal it every bit
Hide it
But its voice reaches my surface
To see this through my face

I try to cover this emotion
So, I cast it away in my notion
Yet, it whispers in my ear
Conveying a voluptuous music from balladeer

I thought it would sweep
If I had one sleep
But I was wrong in haste
For even sleep I cannot taste

In every move, I can feel the passion
The strong feeling runs in my blood and wants my submission
It succumbs my whole being
Now, I cannot resist it anymore this feeling

Though I bury it
Though I conceal it
I cannot conquer it anymore
This feeling puts me in torment more and more

I close my eyes
In the silence of my heart and mind it unties
There is a cry
A cry burdens my heart and mind to be crucify

I cannot subdue it anymore
It's you my heart cries for more
But who will knew it out of blue?
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This is a repost poem; I've already had published it here in my blog a year ago. I consider "Echoes of Caressing Cry" as one of the best poem I wrote about love. When I first write it in December 1, 2003, all think about is that this is a love poem but as I read on it can be a poem for courting or give on a love letter to woo someone. In the end it turned out one of the best - an "obra". Be the judge. But for me this poem is one of the best love poems I write since the day I begin loving to write.

Echoes of Caressing Cry tells what is happening to someone who is succumb by love and keeps on hiding that love. No matter how many times you try to hide it, it will burden your feelings as your heart cries for that love. It won't go away. And though you conceal it, you find it hard to make her/him see that love for it is only you who tries to conceal that echo of I love you.

Glance

Glance

A glimpse of you
In the look of love
My heart was in sweet response
My mind was in dream beyond

In just looking at you
The blow of air stops
The time of space slows
And only the fire of emotion flows

In time to ponder
All I can think about is you
All my dreams in nights was you
All started in just a glance of you

A glance ito your eyes
And I see... love
Circling around the blackness of your pupil in my fantasy
How I wish more of you I could see

I want to look in your eyes longer
Longer, so that its beauty stays in my mind
And understand the depth of its emotion
I want to look at you longer than devotion

A glance into your face
And I see more of your loveliness
How I wish I could lay my lips there
To kiss the smoothness of your pale pelt than only to lay a stare

I want to caress your face
I desire to feel its loveliness
But I also long to you to cradle my face
So I can kiss your palm in my sweet pace

I'm longing to held your hand than just a glimpse
And press it to feel your warmth
I want to touch your lips
So in my dreams I could kiss those red lips

I'm longing to let you know my passionate love
Than to bridge it through glances
I want to hug you in my arms of true
So you may feel how much love I pour in you

This is what lies in my desiring reverie
A fantasy of longing for you more than just a look
How I desire this is a reality of romance
So that I won't be dreaming from a mere glance.
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Going back to the old days... I started to posting poems again which I've written. I can't remember since when I last posted my poem in my blog... I think it was a year ago since my last post. Anyway, here we go again back in posting poems. I hope you like it and please do leave a comment about this poem I wrote. Honestly, I haven't write poems lately.... I don't know why... not inspired? Maybe... I did not write any poem since 2005 until to this date. But I'm planning to write again this year... hopefully I get to write again.

Anyway, about the poem "Glance", I wrote this poem last June 4, 2004... fresh from rest after summer class. This poem is about "secret love" because at that time I have a crush classmate in my summer class that seems to be near but yet still "very far away". But I just realized that this poem can be use in courting... as I just read it again while typing this poem. Well, that is the power of poetry. Please do leave a comment about your interpretation of the poem after reading. Have a nice surfing day!

The Moon Fade before the Stars

The Moon Fade before the Stars

I saw your silhoutte in the shadow
In a mere twilight
And trhe mist in heaven cast low
Under the moonlight
The night wind blows
Sounds the requiem of the dark
As the moon white as snow glows
I wandered as adventurer's lark
Then I saw the lovely gloss of your face
Those eyes that could be deceiving
You then reach your hand like swaying lace
And flew me to the sky that is alluring
To the universe I marvel
Near to reach the stars beyond
But emotions stills dwell
I saw Saturn's ring made dust and sand
And we circle around Jupiter
The red nebula, we gaze at
Fantasies in my frustrations behave as healer
Over the grass field we say
The cold night surrounds me
But your deep looks are enough to melt winter snow
or hugs could be better to see
Warmer than the cold night's blow
If sentiments will say would be better
Just only words could ever say
Tender kisses from you never wither
As it all drink all the love and may
Only affection will reign
Your caress never vanish
A pleasure made me insane
All ever finish
Is it only dreams in midnight?
Comes from the veil of moon shine
But all were almost true in my sight
You are only mine
Were so deeply in love in every moment
As the darkness dances with sky
O moon! my hearts sings with ardent
With this youth I can die
I can touch the Milky Way
I can sail through a vast of stars in darkling
I do not need words to say
Just to hear your passerine voice, I'm burning
Of joy, of love, O! more I desire
Foever treasured in my heart
Only sees fantasy of you under the moon
Moments I will remember take part
And when waiting will always be soon
To see you again and meet
Your face, your words, and your eyes
The night falls deep
Light and shine, blow by gale rise
Gone, all painted in my memory and I might
But all was left......
Is only the starry night.
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I wrote this on December 28, 2001, that is probably the longest poem I've wrote so far and one of the most beautiful poem I wrote days before the the end of 2001. It was the last poem I wrote before 2002 in which that following year I rest from writing poems. Yep, I rest the following year in creating poems. For one year I stopped writing poems... I don't know maybe to give time my other "business" & for my studies. But in 2003 I resume on writing again.

The poem is about love - particularly a fantasy love or dream love romance of a kind. What makes this poem beautiful is that (though its long) its romance is narrated in full detail using many personifactions and metaphors in romantic flow. Its a cross dream/fantasy love venturing into the celestial bodies of the universe but ending in a confusing flow. Was the dream & fantasy of love is true or its merely a fantasy & dream brought by the moon and gone by the wind?

Read it... and find out the story of dream/fantasy love. You may post comment for your reactions/opinions.